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Justice Insanity
I'm Not Insane
"Too Dumb For Revenge?"
I couldn't wait to write a piece
When I already arrived inside,
So I'm spending the taxi ride
Writing of why I'd rather be here
I'm sure the place I'll soon reach
Will feel more like home, now -
Doctors putting picks through eyes
Will feel so much better than
Your own family disowning you;
Simply because you're not smart
I think the word our family doctor used,
Was "retarded" or "mental" -
I still don't know what that means,
But I can't understand why intelligence
Means I'm insane enough to undergo
Treatments that may leave me
Even more incapable of anything
Yet, then again... What if they do heal me?
And I can finally prove all my family wrong
And I can show up at their door, smiling
And I can bombard them logical questions
And I can hurt them when they're wrong,
Just like they hurt me when I didn't under-
It looks like I'm here, my new home...
I can't wait to be fixed for my revenge.
I'm Not Insane
"Too Dumb For Revenge?"
I couldn't wait to write a piece
When I already arrived inside,
So I'm spending the taxi ride
Writing of why I'd rather be here
I'm sure the place I'll soon reach
Will feel more like home, now -
Doctors putting picks through eyes
Will feel so much better than
Your own family disowning you;
Simply because you're not smart
I think the word our family doctor used,
Was "retarded" or "mental" -
I still don't know what that means,
But I can't understand why intelligence
Means I'm insane enough to undergo
Treatments that may leave me
Even more incapable of anything
Yet, then again... What if they do heal me?
And I can finally prove all my family wrong
And I can show up at their door, smiling
And I can bombard them logical questions
And I can hurt them when they're wrong,
Just like they hurt me when I didn't under-
It looks like I'm here, my new home...
I can't wait to be fixed for my revenge.
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Escrtito #2 que te dedico.
Ya mi mente envenenada con tu persona ni siquiera puede recordar la razón del por qué estos sentimientos tan destructivos que siento por ti. Ni siquiera sé si tienen sentido mis palabras, cuando hablo de ti me siento como una loca enjaula. Mi locura es el amor que me provocas y mi jaula el deseo que no sacio. Me siento como una estúpida porque me tienes a tus pies y lo sabes, lo sabes porque mi actitud incontrolable te lo demostró. Hay algo que si recuerdo, aquel primer día de clases, aquel sol de 8am que encendía tu pelo color caramelo, aquella mirada profunda atrapada en el vidrio de tus lentes, las vuelta
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La souris
La souris
Dès l'aube nos amis viennent
Leurs regards cherchant
Alentour,
Une photo à sauver de la crasse,
Un objet encore utilisable.
Ils viennent comme la mer
Envahissant chaque pièce.
Inlassablement,
Leur mains frottent les murs
comme si ce fut les leurs.
La boue n'épargne personne,
Les enfants y glissent pieds nus,
Jouant une minuscule patinoire.
Les meubles sont évacués,
Au jardin, vaste salon.
Dans une flaque noire
Une souris morte
Chacun se tait.
L'odeur de la mort
Ne s'oublie jamais.
L'eau douce carresse le sol
Emportant l'indicible.
Au fond,
Nettoyer c'est guérir,
Aprè
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Real Estate
The cost of intellectual property has gone up.
I can already feel the ideas curdling like milk,
Strings of silver silk lining
Tangling it up so neatly--
A package for the loan-shark in my bed in the morning.
A message to my lover, to whom I owe such a debt:
All you ever do anymore is take.
My poems crumble at the touch,
Fading into the clusters of Sunday brunch and Family Guy reruns.
What's the price of the two seconds of quiet
Without a pile of unfilled lines awaiting my autograph
Ruffling through the papers you'll have me sign-
What wouldn't I give to sign with the devil, over you...
Teetering on the corner of thought,
My pen limp and b
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I think I caught another perspective from my own poem... People would hide things from who those they sent into the asylum. Example, saying it's because they're mentally incapable perhaps on an intellectual level rather than saying its because of their violence.
Wasn't my original intention, but I like that idea better...
Wasn't my original intention, but I like that idea better...
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This is so lovely! I wish my poems were as good as yours... But anyway, this is an interesting poem, and I can definitely relate to it. My late grandma was bi polar and everyone thought she was just nuts; but she's one of my hero. I also have gone through issues which make me question if I am nuts or not. Maybe, maybe not?