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I've heard
When you sneeze
You loose an angel

Now,
I could write a poem
About how our angels
Are made of snot & spit
(Pleasant, right?)

I could write a poem
About how many
Angels I've lost
That were never
Returned

I could write a poem
About how many
Angels you've lost

I could write a poem
About angels I will lose
You will lose
And how that affects
Our lives

I could write a poem
About why
Or why not
I believe
The said statement

Have you gotten my point yet?

Poetry
Is written
On known topics

What differs,
Isn't exactly
How it's written,
But the perspective
It's written from

And when I say
Perspective
I don't mean
Up and down
Left or right
Wrong or right

What I mean
Is such a broad idea

Ideas
Individually brought out
In poetry
Dependent of perspective

Those who write
Should understand

Those who don't,
Welcome to our world

Oh, and bless you

I hope you gain back
Another angel ;)
On the drive to my sister's for family christmas, I began reciting this in my head.
I remembered the beginning, and the words flowed out into the notepad on my phone.

Countless poetry begins there.
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killerlord123 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014
So beautiful. I love how sometimes poems can have infinite interpretations.
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LMW-Creations Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. :) Best kind of poetry is kind with so many unsaid interpretations that you're left thinking about it after reading. :)
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killerlord123 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014
If it stays in people's minds then we made an impact :)
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bloodylynx Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014
This is gorgeous. Favorited. You have such a correct and unique point, and you let it flow so beautifully. I will watch you and I hope for more poetry in the future. :))
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LMW-Creations Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Aw, well thank you!!!! :) :) :)
You deserve a hug, already. :meow: :hug:
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