literature

Countdown to Escape

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Ten days until release from the compounds of this Hell.
Nine attempts so far given, escape the bell.
Eight more scars to be felt and seen.
Seven tries to be even less keen.
Six hours of life's empty noise.
Five new stances of poise.
Four beings are left.
Three still deft.
Two bled.
One -
Dead.
I don't wanna write, so here's something I wrote a month or two ago.

Comment: What story comes to mind when reading this? What images did you see to fill in the narrative blanks? I want to hear some different thoughts and perspectives.
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AnnaBellLee17's avatar
I really enjoyed this

and it reminds me of And Then There Were None (the Ten Little Indians).