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My darling angel,
How did I lose you?

The last second I saw you
Was when the leaves were dancing,
Twirling on their branches
And circling their way through air
As they fell down between us

Yet, you were there
Looking at me with those eyes,
As your long, pale brown hair
Drowned behind you

Then the rain that poured,
Drenching the dirt into deep mud
Causing you to run off
How could you ever protect me,
If you weren't around to do so?


Off, you had ran,
I watched as the wisp of your
Beautiful, pearl white dress
Swung around the tip of the corner
As you escaped

Perhaps it was the storm that raged
As I went about, searching for you,
Yearning for protection from fear
That threatened to end it there -

My darling angel,
How did I lose you?
Oh, darling angel,
You lost me.
Inspired by the storm that came through this morning. That doesn't happen around here often, having any rain in the morning - let alone a storm. But storms are only scary when it's dark outside - they're the most beautiful things in the morning. That beautiful moment watching the leaves dance in the wind was ruined when somebody sneezed - but that made me think of the angel myth that coincides with replying "bless you". So, this idea has been circulating my head all day.

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:iconneb-storm:
Neb-Storm Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014
Excellent! :)
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:iconlmw-creations:
LMW-Creations Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:bow:
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:iconkage-yami:
Kage-Yami Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I like it!
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:iconlmw-creations:
LMW-Creations Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:D, :bow:
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:iconartbrosean:
ArtbroSean Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
That's really well written. Great job!
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:iconlmw-creations:
LMW-Creations Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :bow:
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
I hope you can find your angel soon :)
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:iconlmw-creations:
LMW-Creations Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Hopefully she'll return once again when the next storm comes around... Especially if a tornado rips through like the one that practically took a town off the map...
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Then you just have to wait...
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:iconevilscarrlett:
EvilScarrlett Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
it's a lovely poem. :)
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:iconlmw-creations:
LMW-Creations Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, :) :bow:
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:iconevilscarrlett:
EvilScarrlett Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
you're welcome!
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TheDoorWithin Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I love the fifth stanza! *_* Really well done. Its really beautiful :)
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:iconlmw-creations:
LMW-Creations Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!, :bow:
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:icondominicclay123:
dominicclay123 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014
that;s nice that, but I think you meant Who could ever protect me, not How could ever protect me. Don't mean to be picky.
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:iconlmw-creations:
LMW-Creations Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I actually had forgotten the word "you", "How could you ever protect me" - but thanks for pointing that out!!! :D
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:icondominicclay123:
dominicclay123 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014
ahhhh right, makes sense and no problem, it's easy to make mistakes like that, I do it all the time.
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:iconlmw-creations:
LMW-Creations Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I'm one of those "strange" people who doesn't read through her work once the full product is finished - so I never catch all of them, my thoughts go faster than my fingers can type.
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:icondominicclay123:
dominicclay123 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2014
yeah, i get that alot myself, even when i post stuff, sometimes i won't know for days, until i go back through it again.
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WheresAJacket Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
good I like this.
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:iconlmw-creations:
LMW-Creations Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:bow:
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Christa-elizabeth Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Well done, I like the imagery. 
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:iconlmw-creations:
LMW-Creations Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, :bow:
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:iconchrista-elizabeth:
Christa-elizabeth Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're welcome Meow :3 
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alTered-Affliction Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is beautiful ... thank you for sharing.  :)
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:iconlmw-creations:
LMW-Creations Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you - and of course. :)
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irishgirl217 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2014  Hobbyist
beautiful, but so sad. I love it.
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:iconlmw-creations:
LMW-Creations Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, :meow: :bow:
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irishgirl217 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2014  Hobbyist
no problem >u<
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