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My darling angel,
How did I lose you?

The last second I saw you
Was when the leaves were dancing,
Twirling on their branches
And circling their way through air
As they fell down between us

Yet, you were there
Looking at me with those eyes,
As your long, pale brown hair
Drowned behind you

Then the rain that poured,
Drenching the dirt into deep mud
Causing you to run off
How could you ever protect me,
If you weren't around to do so?


Off, you had ran,
I watched as the wisp of your
Beautiful, pearl white dress
Swung around the tip of the corner
As you escaped

Perhaps it was the storm that raged
As I went about, searching for you,
Yearning for protection from fear
That threatened to end it there -

My darling angel,
How did I lose you?
Oh, darling angel,
You lost me.
Inspired by the storm that came through this morning. That doesn't happen around here often, having any rain in the morning - let alone a storm. But storms are only scary when it's dark outside - they're the most beautiful things in the morning. That beautiful moment watching the leaves dance in the wind was ruined when somebody sneezed - but that made me think of the angel myth that coincides with replying "bless you". So, this idea has been circulating my head all day.

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:iconneb-storm:
Neb-Storm Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014
Excellent! :)
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:iconlmw-creations:
LMW-Creations Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014  Student Writer
:bow:
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:iconkage-yami:
Kage-Yami Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I like it!
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:iconlmw-creations:
LMW-Creations Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2014  Student Writer
:D, :bow:
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:iconartbrosean:
ArtbroSean Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
That's really well written. Great job!
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:iconlmw-creations:
LMW-Creations Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you! :bow:
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killerlord123 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014
I hope you can find your angel soon :)
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:iconlmw-creations:
LMW-Creations Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Student Writer
Hopefully she'll return once again when the next storm comes around... Especially if a tornado rips through like the one that practically took a town off the map...
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killerlord123 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2014
Then you just have to wait...
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EvilScarrlett Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
it's a lovely poem. :)
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