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Drowning Acrostic

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Daring oneself to continue on to the
 Rarest of depths as we all begin to
  Open up to the water as it gorges,
   Washing away the sins that have
    Now brought us to this very place.

       Dreams have already crashed,
         Rendered to burn in their little
           Obligated Hells in which we
             Wonder how we escaped so
               Narrowly with this chance.

                    Dying bit by bit while
                       Racing water takes
                          On our souls and
                             Wakes us up to
                                 Nothing ~
Inspired by "Goin' Down" by Three Days Grace.
I've been sitting here for the past two hours listening to them trying to make up an acrostic. And I've been doing that action on and off for about two weeks now.
I can now say I'm proud of the turn out, the style was interesting and fun. :)
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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave's avatar
Nice poem. The visual effect came out nicely :)