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Don't give up -
Just give me the tears
You can no longer cry,
And I promise -
I'll take it as a blessing
In the memory of your life

I promise that everyday
Tears will fall
While I think of you,
And they will be for you,
Not about you,
So that I know
Where you are now
Is a happier place

But if you try,
You won't be broken -
Let your tears
Be what seals the cracks
That have led you to this

Reveal, don't conceal
The emotion that strangles
The decision you yearn to make -
For then, and only then,
Shall you cry and show the world
You're strong enough
To show your pain
Instead of running away

But if that's your choice,
Simply remember me, and
Don't give up -
Just give me the tears
You can no longer cry,
And I promise -
I'll take it as a blessing
In the memory of your life
Suicide.
Ever want to cry, but... You just can't?
It's like hiding something that's already hidden from you...
And when the tears aren't there to distract, your mind begins to wander....

...Why?

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Update: This is the first poem I've ever had on the popular 24 hours page.
You're all the sweetest, most lovliest people ever - :hug:
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:icontommyboywood:
tommyboywood Featured By Owner May 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Sweet
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:iconbardockkun:
BardockKun Featured By Owner May 19, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
sad but happy now!!!!
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Silencedbook9 Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Student Writer
Hug Hug Hug Hug Hug Hug Hug Hug Hug Hug Hug Hug Hug Hug Hug 
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LeslieStonehouse Featured By Owner May 17, 2014
...this is a beautiful piece...hit's the nail right on the head :D
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:iconlmw-creations:
LMW-Creations Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you. :)
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:iconkillerlord123:
killerlord123 Featured By Owner May 17, 2014
Simply wonderful. So full of emotion... :huggle:
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:iconlmw-creations:
LMW-Creations Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Student Writer
Thanks. And sounds as if it was a success. :)
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:iconkillerlord123:
killerlord123 Featured By Owner May 18, 2014
You're welcome. And it sure sounds like a success to me :D
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EvilScarrlett Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
wonderful work!!! 
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LMW-Creations Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you!
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