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Levels of Life

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Level One: Ignorance Is Bliss
Young, fragile minds think
Curiously, and seemingly forever
No true, worth the matter, fears
Simply what hides in the dark
When we're too young to think
Too beneath to prepare ourselves


Level Two: Taking For Granted
We begin to understand things
Society is something we don't agree
Family means little to us at all
It's all about this new freedom
A time we learn right from wrong


Level Three: Old Habits Die Hard
Our previous beliefs crash down
Avalanches of truth break on our heads
We never expected society to be so evil
We never knew families meant well
We never realized there's more in life


Level Four: Getting the Handle
Out first thoughts are trash, long gone
Nowadays it's all go-with-the-flow times
Though we're still young, living here
No matter what - things won't be perfect
But at least we've realized that much


Level Five: Life Ain't Fair
Stress and disease begin to win
Our loves start their way of fading out
Everything's purpose begins to lose
While lights shine about as temptations


Level Six: Life Is A Path To Hell
Not everyone is able to get what's wanted
Some still believe the world can be pleased
Because the truth hurts - and is avoided


Level Seven: Life Sucks, Then You Die
Since when was ignorance bliss?
Why are things taken for granted?
Shouldn't meaningless habits be dropped?
How do we know when everything's handled?
What made life illusionally ever fair?
Who ever brought all this Hell to Earth?
Why don't we consider until it's too late?
Inspired by this little six word piece --> 
Life isJust a game we can't win
Just enough to have gotten me thinking. I also decided to use a cliche for each title, since those are widely known for the most part. (Thought of cliches also inspired by the author of that six word story's comment somewhere else that I read before writing this piece).

April 21st, 2014 - 6:47 PM
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Shivampoet's avatar
This is a good way of writing. Thumbs up