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Sangrado Lluvia

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Si eres el cielo encima,
Lo que eres la lluvia triste.
Querido, me haces llorar...

Rojo y puro, fuiste -
Cayendo sobre mí
Con tal dulzura...

Ahora sangra, mi amor,
Sangra por la lluvia
Y ser mi aguacero
Well...
I wrote this?
Hm.

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Bleeding Rain

If you are the sky above,
Then you are the sad rain.
Darling, you make me cry...

Red and pure, you were -
Falling over me
With such sweetness...

Now bleed, my love,
Bleed by the rain
And be my downpour
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O.O wow breathtaking. You need to write more in Spanish. It's almost like your poetic self transforms itself through the language. As does the play of the liquids in your poem: tears, rain and blood. I am thoroughly impressed ^.^