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When the memories arise
Being their triggering cause
For who knows what scene

Outrage from easy changes
We know we could have made,
But we can’t do anything
To make the past something else

Depressive tears pouring like rain
On the stormiest night,
Feeling the pain just in the way
Drops pelt our skin

Even utter happiness felt by
The minorities of simplicity,
A moment so falsely true
Like the sun that always sets

When the memories arise
Being their triggering cause
For who knows what scene

Inspired by watching Silver Linings Playbook. A movie about bipolar disorder.

And I had an episode today… I knew it was only time before I snapped, I could feel it. It’s like rage covered by a thin sheet, but once that sheet is seen through it’s torn apart…

On the bright side, that episode became more tears than anger. Another point for controlling my anger - I’ve kept it back for a long time AND I didn’t let it win. :D (And I didn't hurt myself in the process, either - double bonus! :))

3.30.14

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killerlord123 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014
:tighthug: (Because I can't think about anything to say...)
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LMW-Creations Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014  Student Writer
*takes hug* Those are always accepted to, it says what words can't. :meow:
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killerlord123 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014
Hehe, I'm glad :)
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Kage-Yami Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
At least all's well and good now. :hug:
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LMW-Creations Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Student Writer
I's suppose you could word at that way... But, I have been improving over the years on anger. :D (Only bad thing is, as that improves the depressive side is becoming the problem... But that's on a path to improvement, too so :))
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Kage-Yami Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:)

:huggle:
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Kage-Yami Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
And the poem describes what was really well, I think. (I totally didn't press submit earlier -.-)
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AnnaBellLee17 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Student Writer
nice job at giving us insight... and is that the movie that stars Lawerence? 
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LMW-Creations Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Student Writer
Thanks... And yes. I love her. So much. IDOL.
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AnnaBellLee17 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Student Writer
i think she did a great job at being Katniss.  thumbs up to her.
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