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The ground beneath
Freezing a bare back,
The concrete cold
From the wind let in
By an open window
It's worth fighting for

The music of the rain
Pouring from outside
Fills the empty sound
Of my unbeating heart
They'll try to take your pride

I'll lay here in set
Of forever's end
As what life I posses
Slips and drains away
Try to take your soul

Yet still, the attention
Of my eyes captures
The bright of the moon
Bringing a sparse light
To the darkness of night
They'll try and take all the control


My arms raise from
The solid, cold ground
As I reach out for
What I'm blockaded by
They'll look you in the eyes

The window is open
Curtains flutter about
Yet my dreams outside
Are so far away...
Fill you full of lies

Yet, they're real, true
My blind eyes have them
In my gone-by sight
Believe me they're gonna try

The crushing hopes
Twinkle about as stars
As I finally, now realize:
So when you're feeling crazy

My dreams are real,
Far from my near grasp -
Yet within possible reach
And things fall apart

It's not my dreams,
It's how I'm reaching
Based on from where
Listen to your head

If I could reach for
The open window, first
I could raise my arms
And capture the stars
Remember who you are


The ground isn't as cold
When the alarm clock
Wakes me from my slumber
You're the one

I sit and notice the
Curtains are still, rather
Than waving around
You're the one

The window is open,
The sun is glowing bright...
Just another day
Unbreakable heart
Inspired by someone else's poem that was written a while ago (and I can't find it again) while I was listening to Unbreakable Heart. (Italicized words belong to TDG).
Then this happened.
Enjoy.

Update: The lyrics were supposed to be in italics.

3.20.14
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EvilScarrlett Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
good combo here. I like the poem and the song. :) (sorry I'm so late to comment. this one got pushed to the back behind some other stuff I'm saving to read)
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LMW-Creations Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2014  Student Writer
That's all right - I enjoy comments on older pieces. :)
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EvilScarrlett Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:D
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KingfisherSilentArmy Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Really great poem and I like how you used that 3DG song clever!
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LMW-Creations Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Student Writer
Thanks, I've heard from another silentarmy user that you also like TDG. :meow:
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KingfisherSilentArmy Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome and yes I really like TDG's music, I think it ROCKS!! :D
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LMW-Creations Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Student Writer
Epicness right there. What's your favorite album? (Mine's their most recent, Transit of Venus).
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KingfisherSilentArmy Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oooh difficult to say I think it would have to be half of One-X with half of Life Starts Now :D!! I really like Without You but then I really like some songs on Transit of venus too like Unbreakable Heart, Expectations and definitely Give me a Reason that's an awesome song!!
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LMW-Creations Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2014  Student Writer
Unbreakable Heart, Expectations, Chalk Outline, Broken Glass... I will end up listing ALL of those songs, and Life Starts Now is right behind that album. I've listened to One-X so many times, as an album overall it's my least favorite. (Although some of the songs are my top favorites such as Gone Forever, Animal I Have Become, Let It Die...
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KingfisherSilentArmy Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Giggle  yeah I know! there's a lot of great songs they've done! Gone Forever is one of my top favourites too :highfive: I always end up jigging around when that one is on!
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