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Why Can't I Try?

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I've failed you.

I can't heal your past,
And you're so far gone
I can't improve your future.

You hurt me terribly
When you told me stop,
You killed my spirit...

I'm sorry I tried.
He told me that nobody could help him. I told him I wanted to try and would continue to try. He told me to stop trying. He told me to stop trying to save a life. That hurt so terribly. I didn't say anything back, I waited for ten minutes in silence then left. It still hurts, it hurts like a broken heart...

I won't stop trying, though. This is the second time I've cried for him... I can't stop trying, not until he's happy and wants to be alive.
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keep trying he'll get there.